HAWKSTORM [Complete Hawkfrost mid-western gothic themed Warriors MAP]

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Published 2022-04-03
CW: this MAP contains graphic imagery of animal death and tornadoes
Make sure to join the Mini-MAPathon! Hawkstorm is one of two country midwestern MAPs premiereing tomorrow    • April 2nd mini-MAPathon  

This MAP is about Hawkstorm's inability to cope with the guilt and blame of Tadpole's death. Hawkstorm was born in thunderclan as Tawnykit alongside his siblings Bramblekit and Tadpolekit (Tadpole for short!). But on one unfortunate day, Tawnykit and his siblings stray from home and play inside an old, abandoned barn in the midst of a Tornado. Fireheart manages to catch up to the kits but he's too late. The barn collapses on Tadpole and Fireheart has to stop Tawnykit's attempts to rescue Tadpole to avoid losing him to the rubble too. On their way back to Thunderclan, Tawnykit can't let go of the feeling that if Fireheart hadn't stopped him, he could've saved Tadpole. Unable to cope with the weight of guilt and blame, Tawnykit runs off never to return back home but he'll never be able to run away from the haunting figure that manifests these feelings.

Tawnykit renames himself Hawkstorm and takes on the "storm" suffix as a way to symbolize how he will never be able to forget the storm he lost Tadpole to.

Years later, Hawkstorm tries to rekindle his relationship with his estranged brother Brambleclaw, but their relationship is strained because of Brambleclaw's loyalty to Firestar. When another tornado strikes Thunderclan, Firestar gets caught in a fox trap. Hawkstorm is led to Firestar by the haunting figure and he's given a chance to rescue Firestar just like Fireheart rescued Tawnykit all those years ago.


SONG: God's Whisper by Raury
END CREDITS SONG: Levithan by Raury
MAP part playlist:    • Hawkstorm PARTS  

ORGINAL SCRIPT: docs.google.com/document/d/15FF9w3H-luOeV7ZzjPa4qc…
STORYBOARD:    • Hawkstorm // God's Whisper // Warrior...  
Thumbnail entries: docs.google.com/document/d/1DSi4nlidGzPJZybMEF4E2Y…

-PARTICIPANTS-
Intro: Sundyr + LUNARTEMPEST
1: Cold Rising
2: Osinka
3: Loporidae
4: Sqwid + CheetehZ
5: Fude
6: Shenkkazoo
7: OFUKITTY + SmellyTrashRat + DaveThyQueen + Ashuribbon + Sparroet
8: Pandaa + CheetehZ
9: Dirtynoodles
10: ScooterScones
11: DragonwolfRooke + Rookruff + mobiusghost + fungus
12: Aspen Shadow
13: Riin + Rookruff + Cameron Collar
14: TheWisetDino + Mudshadow
15: chadisms
16: bread cat
17: Sunbird + phoenix-feathered + aethalcyon + raven's corvax
18: QuirKrash
19: Amelia B
20: Jaytail + DuskF
21: Koheina + Olfmyst + OFUKITTY
22: peacat + mossysprout + Bregottski + draivysand
23: Bregottski + Galaxymew
24: darkpurplx
25: melowon_z + LadyCallow
26: DaveThyQueen + Riin
27: Eqqnoq + Owlipoppen + SolarSparky
28: POKITUU
29: druid's hollow
30: Sparroet
31: Bolitamurcielago + Sparroet
32: Treeetooop
33: Cheezballs + mobiusghost
34: HJ7 + dreamtdog
35: rexasawrus
36: Sagutoyas
37: GiingerSnaps
38: Cante Skuya
39: Nettlefang
40: Nettlefang
41: SirKupo + Jay Grimalkind
42: voideitii
43: Luyeshin + Ray Née
44: Cameron Collar
45: Kelpie Calamity + Sparroet
46: Chikki + HJ7 + icteridcorvid
Finale: Coffeely

c0: Mishi

c1: dreamtdog
c2: Mishi + Erm
c3: Cameron C
c4: Turnip
c5: Grimalkind
c6: Ashuribbon
c7: Galaxymew + sparroet
c8: Mayartimations
c9: Shummy
c10: Batkittii
c11: steadie
c12: laerin + cinnabarlab + LenisLynx
c13: kirikerise + Pigeocore
c14: Teekonu
c15: senswii


Thumbnail winner: Milkfake

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All Comments (21)
  • @Milkfake
    I’m in SHOCK!! I cant express how honored I am to have my artwork included in this incredible project. I’m reading through the comments mentioning it already and I can’t say how much pride I feel. Thank you so much to all who enjoyed the art, it really was so fun to illustrate and I’m happy with it. Every entry to this MAP was incredible and captured the atmosphere so well, and every artist should be proud. This MAP touches on so many subjects I love, both visually and writing-wise. Hawkstorm is going to remain in my mind for a long time, so this truly means a lot. This project is going to be absolutely incredible!
  • @navigatorbree
    THE FACT THAT HAWKSTORM SPECIFICALLY CARRIES HOLLYLEAF, THE ONE THAT LOOKS LIKE TADPOLE, BACK CAREFULLY
  • @coyotix
    I like how Firestar’s design makes him look sort of like a fox. It gives true meaning to why Hawkstorm wanted to save the Three from the fox. It gave him deja vu from when he lost his kit brother because a cat that looked like a fox stopped him from helping, and he didn’t want to hurt any other kits the same way.
  • The fact that Hawk picked up Hollykit when he saved the kits and then later looking at her reminds him of Tadpole is genius.
  • @pinokr4898
    ARE WE NOT GONNA TALK ABOUT THAT HAWK COVERING HAWKSTORM AT 3:05 GIVING HIM HAWK WINGS? ITS SUCH A COOL CONCEPT
  • @fedo9737
    Bramble really went, "I'm sorry Hawk, but you've 'ohed' your last 'na na.'" Proceeds to stab Hawk with the stick
  • One thing I noticed is that it is only Hawkstorm who ever lipsinks to the song. Whenever other characters speak they are not saying the same things as the song, while Hawkstorm ONLY says the words of the song. It puts us even further in his perspective. That he is deaf to the words the others say, instead we only hear him. Same as whenever Hawkstorm is looking at Firestar he is stoic and cold, painted as a villain, but when he turned away, Firestar just looks concerned. I find these really neat details.
  • There's so much hidden symbolism in this map, but the most heartbreaking parts for me are the fact that when Hawk saves the kits, he chooses to pick up Holly can carry her to safety. She was the kit that most looked like Tadpole, and he was able to do for her what he couldn't do for his brother. Another sad fact are the flowers Hawk leaves at Tadpole's grave. Its the same type of flower that used to be in his fur, and possibly represents that Hawk keeps giving up a part of himself for his lost sibling, always placing a piece of the past on his grave.
  • god, i adore how a plank falls in front of tadpole when he reaches out. that plank WOULD have killed tawnykit, but fireheart prevented that from happening. we already knew fire wanted to save him, but this is extra proof that he definitely would have died if he went after tadpole
  • OK I'm in love with the scene of tadpole clinging to hawkstorms arm and disappearing into it as he raises it. the dual symbolism of hawkstorm attempting to avenge tadpole while doing the exact opposite of what he would've wanted it beautifully done
  • 6:28 When you realize now that the green glow could be from Sol's time/space portal
  • @soulslvr9562
    I love how upon the end you can tell that all these parts of Tadpole wasn't him wanting vengeance against the person who didnt save him but instead he wanted HawkStorm to move on and find peace. But it was his presence that drove him to not move on at the end of the day. Hawkstorm hung onto it and grew bitter and resentful and for that he paid.
  • @icewolvz6977
    oh my god the last scene with Tadpole being revealed as the shadowy figure broke my heart. I should've guessed given all the hints, but jesus it brought actual tears to my eyes. Tadpole was just trying to show Hawk that he didn't blame Fireheart for his death, and that Hawk shouldn't either.
  • @mythwings
    I absolutely love the detail at 3:23, right before Hawkstorm (Tawny) was about to kill Firestar. As Hawkstrom raised his paw Tadpolekit rapped around his paw. It was like he was saying, "This is for Tadpolekit." It hits even closer to home that Tadpolekit wanted him to save Firstar so he can overcome his guilt but his emotion was just to strong and took him over. This shows that Hawkstorm was intentionally trying to kill Firstar for not letting him save Tadpolekit all those years ago.
  • Oml,, the comparison at 5:36 of the sheer size between them. It really solidifies how young they were. Tadpole is so small, especially compared to Hawkstorm, who seems huge and menacing next to him. The contrast of innocence and vengance. Wow.
  • @tovulpes
    3:22 the animator drawing Tadpole being distressed and trying to get help just broke me. anyway goodnight going off to sleep with crying
  • @cxtgxrl1177
    3:20 where the ghostie grabs his arm then gets like thrown off is such great yet subtle symbolism!!
  • @creature5966
    Tadpole: “Come on help him out!” Hawkstorm: “Sooooo kill him?” Tadpole: “What no I don’t want you to kill him!” Hawkstorm: “Got it. Kill him.”