Car Ride

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Published 2023-12-18

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  • Dave is the doctor/scientist and apprentice. Also the fact that the inside joke of Wendy’s sells a Dave’s double which a double is like a twin or clone is amazing for the story.
  • @gaspioro
    This storytelling is EXCELLENT, Jonny's skill to make stories is beyond perfection
  • @GameristicForce
    It’s amazing to see that Jonny is literally writing a story better than disney
  • @45gt
    the fact that jonny is insane at videography is crazy
  • @silver_minecraft
    this arg is getting CRAZY!! can't wait to see what happens next, good work guys.
  • @PastaManEnjoyer
    DAMN, IS THE BOSS HAVING A REDEMPTION ARC? i didn't think i'd ever live to see this
  • Jonny should honestly just make a Netflix movie at this point, im sure it would do well.
  • @TheSpamtonReal
    Can we just acknowledge Jonny's ability to write a story?
  • @Fantasy_Nerd
    Someone: How invested are you in this story? Me: yes
  • @No-Name-06
    Jonny really made two people sitting in the car climatic
  • @vicvin9106
    Can we just acknowledge the pure sheer and depth of this story absolutely amazing killing it Jonny all of you are killing it!
  • I swear if Preston/Clone Riggy turns out to be the real Main antagonist of all this….(I’m actually kinda hoping he gets a redemption too since he’s shown signs he’s not as bad as he seems. Heck he’s even friends with Phalure)
  • @caarthikraj8184
    This is legitimately one of the best works I've seen on this platform.
  • I love how in this story, unlike in most, both sides can be sympathized with so the people who like the boss aren’t just people who wanna be different, and they have reasoning. I also love how kind Jonny is as a character, it’s a nice touch to see him feel bad for someone he tried to kill him.
  • @cosmicfilms5280
    This, now this is a masterpiece. Everything about this flows so well, but there’s one scene in particular that I think is a standout in this. I love the moment where the Boss simply says that he does as he does because it’s all that he’s accustomed to, which makes sense since he was taken from an early age and raised by the Doctor (Dave) during his entire life, having to watch his experiments and hearing his ideas of perfect twins, I.E, the concept behind the Clones. Not only that, but he’s committed to erasing Shorts in general, having conceived numerous plans in order to achieve his goal, no matter how morally dubious they ultimately are; he’s essentially committed his entire being into the act, and yet, Jonny still chooses to approach him, offer that he could change, that he could grow, which also shows how endearing Jonny himself can be as a character, after all, this is his twin brother, apart of his blood and DNA, his family. And the Boss? He simply turns him down, all because everything he’s experienced, all that’s happened to him, to bring him to this point, is what holds him back from being able to simply join Jonny, and still holds the veil that now can only dangle in front of him: the mask. The mask he’s put up is what guides the Boss, no matter the situation, and in a way, you start to pity him, you start to see a bit more into the Boss. Overall, this scene elevates the video from being great, to a masterpiece, and one of the greatest things to come out of Shorts Wars. So, I tip my hat off to you, Jonny, for this, is one of the most well-written videos I have feasted my eyes upon.
  • This means there is a third twin, even though it is perceived to us that “the boss” is the third twin. I believe that Jonny is the first, We don’t k is yet is the second, and the boss is the third. I think we see the 2nd twin in season 3. And in my opinion, he won’t be on our side.